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【題目】書面表達

假設某中學生英文報組織學生開展一場如何建立良好師生關系的討論，請你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，以How to build a good teacher-studen trelationship為題，用英語寫一篇稿件，向報社投稿，簡述有利于建立良好師生關系的教師行為和學生行為，并就你所理解的存在的問題提出建議。

How to build a good teacher-student relationship
教師方面	關心學生，熱愛學生； 耐心引導，嚴格要求； 更多交流，更多鼓勵
學生方面	尊重老師，相互理解； 勤奮好學，專心聽講；
存在問題及建議	請根據(jù)你的理解列出一個問題，并提出相應建議

注意：1詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2短文應包括上表中所示內(nèi)容，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整。

3可以適當發(fā)揮，使條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名與校名。

How to build a good teacher-student relationship

A good teacher-student relationship will make learning enjoyable and interesting for the students and teaching important and meaningful for a teacher______________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】How to build a good teacher-student relationship

A good teacher-student relationship will make learning enjoyable and interesting for the students and teaching important and meaningful for a teacher.

Good teachers should have good behaviour. They should care for students and love them. In teaching they should teach them carefully, and also be strict with them. They should often communicate more with their students and encourage the students more.

As students, we should be polite to our teachers and understand them. We should work hard and listen to teachers carefully in class. We can do something meaningful for teachers.

But sometimes teachers make us stay up too late. And we often feel tired and sleepy in class the next day. I think teachers should encourage us to have more after-school activities and we students should work even harder at our lessons. It needs the efforts of both teachers and students to build a good teacher-student relationship.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，話題是How to build a good teacher-student relationship，本文時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點，列好提綱。寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要適當添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意添加的內(nèi)容要緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都要包括，缺一不可。語言表達要符合英語習慣。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點；應用了我們熟悉的句型和短語They should care for students and love them. In teaching they should teach them carefully, and also be strict with them， As students, we should be polite to our teachers and understand them等，本文語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，用詞準確、句子通順、表達清楚條理、行文連貫。