Question

【題目】假設(shè)你叫李明，你們班級(jí)要選拔新班長，你想向班主任王老師推薦張航。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫一封80詞左右的推薦信給王老師。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

姓名	張航
特長	精通電腦，擅長演講
性格、品質(zhì)	自信、勤奮、謙虛、有條理、樂于助人
個(gè)人事跡	經(jīng)常花很多時(shí)間組織課外活動(dòng)，從不介意為班級(jí)做額外的工作，總是盡最大努力幫助同學(xué)，深受同學(xué)們歡迎。

Dear Mr Wang,

I’m writing to recommend Zhang Hang as our new monitor.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope you can consider my recommendation.

Answer 1

【答案】I think he has some strong qualities for this position. Zhang Hang is confident. He is good at making speeches. He also does well in computers. He is hard-working, modest and organized. He often spends lots of time organizing after-school acivities.

He is very helpful, too. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He always tries his best to help other students. He is very popular with us.

I think Zhang Hang is the most suitable person to be our monitor.

【解析】

本文屬于材料作文，向老師推薦張航做我們的班長。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be good at, do well in, spend+時(shí)間+doing, too, mind doing, try one’s best to do, be popular with等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。