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【題目】書面表達

生活中我們時常會遭遇一些突發(fā)狀況，例如流鼻血、割傷、骨折等。 發(fā)生這些情況時，我們該如何更好地給自己或他人進行緊急救治呢？請以“How to Protect Ourselves”為題，寫一篇80詞以上的文章，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

要求：1. 選擇一種情景，介紹該情景下的正確急救方法；

2. 針對“如何預(yù)防這些事故”這一問題提些建議。

提示： 不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

How to Protect Ourselves

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Answer 1

【答案】How to Protect Ourselves

What should we do when we break our leg? First, stay calm and call 120 right away. It may hurt a little, but doctors can offer you the best treatment. Next, fix your broken leg and don't move. If you move your leg around, the situation may get even worse. Finally, tell the doctors exactly what happened and let them take over. Doctors can only help when they know how you get hurt, so be honest about the accident.

To better protect ourselves from these accidents, we may do as follows:

First, develop a good living habit and keep yourself in good health. A strong body can keep you away from accidents. Besides, always be careful and mind your step when walking outside. Things never go wrong when you pay full attention to everything around you. Last, make full preparation before you do something risky. For example, you should fully stretch yourself before doing sports.

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文，以“How to Protect Ourselves”為題，寫一篇80詞以上的文章，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第二、三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It may hurt…、If you move …、the situation may get…和you should…等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。