Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

現(xiàn)在很多同學(xué)都有許多不良習(xí)慣。例如，經(jīng)常吃零食、 不愛(ài)運(yùn)動(dòng)、亂扔垃圾、不講衛(wèi)生等等。這些都是極其不好的習(xí)慣，對(duì)身體有大的危害。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文，指出害處并提出有利于健康的好習(xí)慣。不少于80 詞。

1．要點(diǎn)完整、層次清晰、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫。

2．文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

Answer 1

【答案】

Now many students have had habits. They eat too many snacks and they dislikes sports. They throw litter here and there. They don’t protect the environment at all. These habits are bad. They are also bad for their health. If you eat too many snacks before meals, you will not feel like eating any food .Then you will be ill. So stop eating snacks. We should eat more vegetables and fruit and take more exercise. If we do so, we'll be healthier and happier.

【解析】

試題分析：我們首先應(yīng)該確定用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，本文應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)。靈活采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文時(shí)態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，敘事流暢，內(nèi)容表達(dá)清晰，使用了不少固定結(jié)構(gòu)，如：be bad for, not at all, here and there等。文中還使用then, so, if等詞使文章內(nèi)容連貫, 語(yǔ)言流暢，最后條件狀語(yǔ)從句的使用十分恰當(dāng)。