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【題目】某英語雜志征稿，要求根據(jù)下列提示信息寫一篇80詞左右的梳游肯而的文童。文童的標(biāo)顥及開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

大多數(shù)人都喜歡旅游，因為旅游是一種很好的戶外活動。你可以欣賞自然美景、呼吸新鮮空氣、廣交朋友，重要的是你可以忘記疲勞，保持身體健康。當(dāng)然了，還有可能發(fā)生其他的事。你也可以寫寫你所遇到的有趣的事情。

Traveling

Most of the people like traveling because it is a very good outdoor activity．We may enjoy the

Answer 1

【答案】Traveling

Most of the people like traveling because it is a very good outdoor activity．We may enjoy the nature when We go out for traveling，and we may enjoy the fresh air outside．Besides，we can make many friends．The important thing is that we can forget that we are tired and forget the unhappy things．Traveling is good for our health．

However，sometimes，we may run into troubles when going traveling．For example，we can’t change the weather．It may be rainy when we are traveling．So we should prepare things well before the trip．And I hope everyone could enjoy himself／herself during the travel.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹旅游的好處。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：because it is……，we can……，It may be……，So we should……，And I hope……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.