Question

【題目】書面表達。（共20分）

假如你是Sandy，想邀請你的朋友Amy來你的新家。請你按照下面的提示寫一篇邀請函。80詞左右。

要點：

1. 新家離市中心乘地鐵半小時遠，住8樓，有一個大陽臺；

2. 鄰居們友好善良，一些志愿者經(jīng)常幫助人們解決各種問題，生活舒適愉快；

3. 路線：乘地鐵到達人民路（Renmin Road），從A出口處出來；

4. 沿著馬路走，在第二個十字路口向右拐，會看見一個郵局。我家在它旁邊，很好找的；

5. 盼望著見到你。

Dear Amy,

I would like to invite you to my new home. _____________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Sandy

Answer 1

【答案】

【思路導航】

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹Sandy想邀請他的朋友Amy來他的新家，介紹他新家的位置和到家路線。結合所給材料可知，本文主要可采用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為單數(shù)第一、三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：It is..., I live..., My neighbors are..., Some of them are..., you can..., I’m sure...等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序及邏輯關系。

【參考范文】

Dear Amy,

I would like to invite you to my new home. It is half an hour by underground from my home to the city center. I live on the eighth floor with a big balcony. My neighbors are friendly and kind. Some of them are volunteers, and they often help people with all kinds of problems. I live a comfortable and happy life here.

To get to my home, you can take the underground to Renmin Road. Get out at Exit A. Walk along the road, turn right at the second crossing and you’ll see a post office. My home is just beside it.

I’m sure you can find my home easily.

I am looking forward to seeing you.

Yours,

Sandy

【解析】略

【寫作亮點】

本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了想要邀請Amy來新家，接下來介紹新家的位置、鄰居的情況、到家路線等，最后期望早日見到Amy。此處invite sb to some place, from...to..., help sb with sth, all kinds of, get to, take the underground, at the second crossing, look forward to doing sth等短語的正確運用也讓文章增色不少。