Question

【題目】【內(nèi)蒙古呼和浩特市2015年中考英語試題】初級寫作：(滿分15分)

假如你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生會主席王東,為了配合環(huán)保教育主題活動,請根據(jù)下面所給提示,用英語寫一封倡議書，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 環(huán)保措施和美化城市的措施（各2條）；

2. 你的希望。

注意：

1. 注意文章的整體連貫；

2. 文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3. 80詞左右。

Dear friends,

In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should ______________________

____________________________________________________________________________

Thank you!

Wang Dong

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear friends,

In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should do what we can to protect it. First, we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful. Also, always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste water everywhere. As we all know, water is becoming less and less. So it’s quite necessary to save water. For example, turn the tap off after washing. Last, but not the least, we’d better ride a bike or walk when going out instead of driving a car.

In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner!

Thank you.

Wang Dong

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇環(huán)保的倡議書。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：we should ...，So it’s quite necessary to...，we’d better....，if everyone tries his best to...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用連詞使文章前后連貫，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，適當(dāng)?shù)难a充一些保護環(huán)境的措施。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了倡議書的目的是保護環(huán)境，接下來介紹保護環(huán)境的措施：種樹、不要亂扔垃圾、節(jié)約用水，騎自行車或步行外出，最后闡述自己的觀點，要盡力保護環(huán)境。此處remember not to do sth, as we all know, turn off, had better, try one’s best to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。