Question

【題目】

假如你是Jenny或Bob，你現(xiàn)在正在英國學(xué)習(xí)，你給你的朋友寄了三張照片，下面的表格中記錄了這三張照片的情景，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中所提供的信息給你的朋友寫信詳細(xì)描述一下這三張照片。信的開頭已給出。

	weather	activities (what you are doing)	place
photo 1	beautiful and sunny	play beach volleyball with friends (you)	beach
photo 2	rain heavily outside	read books (you), do homework (one of your class mates)	library
photo 3	windy and humid	listen to the teacher, learn to speak English (all the students in your class)	classroom

Dear friend,

Now I’m studying in the United Kingdom. Here are some of my photos.

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Yours,

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friend,

Now I’m studying in the United Kingdom. Here are some of my photos. In the 1st photo, I am playing beach volleyball with friends on the beach. It’s very beautiful and sunny. In the 2nd photo, it rains heavily outside. One of my classmates is doing homework, while I’m reading books in the library. In the last photo, it’s windy and humid. All the students in my class are listening to the teacher in the classroom.

Yours,

Jenny

【解析】試題分析：這篇作文所給材料詳盡，寫作時(shí)內(nèi)容要明確，涵蓋要求的所有信息，詞數(shù)要合格，結(jié)構(gòu)要嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，流暢，語言使用要正確。我們需要的時(shí)態(tài)是現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài),主要用到第一人稱和第三人稱。注意單詞的拼寫，書寫工整，卷面干凈，整齊。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文簡(jiǎn)潔明了，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)了題目中的所有信息。并使用了連詞while，副詞heavily。在學(xué)習(xí)中要注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。