Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)技術(shù)的不斷發(fā)展,人們傳遞情感的方式也在不斷變化。假如你叫王強(qiáng),上周你就“使用紙質(zhì)卡片還是電子卡片?”在班級(jí)展開了一項(xiàng)調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你給China Daily報(bào)社寫一封信,介紹此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果并發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)。

約30% 的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	約70% 的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	你的看法
使用紙質(zhì)卡片: 1.手工制作,表達(dá)真情 2.攜帶方便,便于保存 3.……	使用電子卡片: 1.信息量大,傳遞快捷 2.節(jié)約紙張,利于環(huán)保 3.……	1.…… 2.…… (至少2條)

要求:1)表達(dá)清楚,語(yǔ)法正確,上下連貫;

2)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

3)詞數(shù):100詞左右(信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));

4)不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。

Dear Editor,

I am writing to tell you about the survey I've made on“Using paper cards or e-cards?”in our class.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Qiang

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I am writing to tell you about the survey I've made on“Using paper cards or e-cards?”in our class.

About 30% of the students want to use paper cards.First of all,they are made by hand and they can show people's real feelings.Second,they are easy to take and can be kept for long.Thirdly,people can read them without computers.

However,around 70% of the students prefer to use e-cards.For one thing,e-cards can carry lots of information and people can send them quickly.For another thing,using e-cards can save paper so that our environment can be protected well.What's more,people can make various designs they like.

I think we'd better use e-cards more to save natural resources.But on some particular occasions,we can also use paper cards to show our real feelings.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Qiang

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我們班的“使用紙質(zhì)卡片還是電子卡片?”的調(diào)查結(jié)果以及我的觀點(diǎn)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：About 30% of the students want to……，they are easy to……，e-cards can……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。