Question

【題目】假如你是初三學(xué)生李華，在初三緊張的學(xué)習(xí)生活中，你感受到了父母對(duì)你濃濃的愛。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，向你的美國朋友Tom寫一封信�！　�

1．成績(jī)并不優(yōu)異，但父母一直鼓勵(lì)你；

2．父母在其他方面對(duì)你的關(guān)愛（自擬兩點(diǎn)）；

3．表達(dá)對(duì)父母的感激之情；

4．請(qǐng)對(duì)方回信，談?wù)勛约旱母改浮?/span>

具體要求：

1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括上面提示的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；

2．詞數(shù)：100個(gè)詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3．語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整；

4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名、姓名等其他信息，否則，不予評(píng)分。

Dear Tom,

How's it going? This time I'd like to talk about my parents. I don't realize how much they love me until I am under pressure．

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Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

How’s it going? This time I’d like to talk about my parents. I don’t realize how much they love me until I am under pressure.

I am not good at study, but my parents always encourage me to be confident and keep trying. Every day they come home, they go out of their way to make delicious food for me. They look after me as well as they can. Also, they pay much attention to my feelings. Whenever they find me upset, they will communicate with me patiently. Now I have made a decision to study harder and understand my parents better. Only in this way can I show my thanks to my parents.

Please write soon and tell me about your parents.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】解析：這是一篇提綱作文。內(nèi)容是給美國朋友Tom寫一封信說說你感受到的父母的愛以及感激之情，注意信件的格式，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一、三人稱。
寫作思路：首先需要審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文；其次可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1）成績(jī)并不優(yōu)異，但父母一直鼓勵(lì)你；
2）父母在其他方面對(duì)你的關(guān)愛（自擬兩點(diǎn)）；
3）表達(dá)對(duì)父母的感激之情；
4）請(qǐng)對(duì)方回信，談?wù)勛约旱母改福?/span>
重點(diǎn)短語和句型：encourage sb to do sth鼓勵(lì)某人去做某事，go out of one's way to do sth不辭辛苦做某事，pay attention to注意等等