Question

【題目】【2016浙江金華】書面表達

76. 假如你是No.2 Middle School的學生李華。下周，一批英國中學生將來你們學校進行為期兩周的學習和交流。請根據(jù)下列表格中的要點，寫一封自薦信，邀請其中一位學生來你家居住。

Key points（要點）	Words and expressions for reference（參考詞匯）
Like to do	make friends, …
Able to do	good at, know English culture, ...
Family	friendly, helpful, able to speak English, ...

注意：（1）短文內容可適當增加； （2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；

（3）詞數(shù)：80~100； （4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)。

短文首句：I am Li Hua, a student from No. 2 Middle School.

Dear friend,

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear friend,

I am Li Hua, a boy(girl) student from No.2 Middle School. I’m writing to invite you to live in my home during the next two weeks.

I like to make friends. This is the main reason I write this letter. I’m also good at sports. I want to know something about British culture. Do you think we have a lot to talk about?

As for my family, you will like it the moment you comes. My parents are not only kind and friendly but also helpful. Believe it or not, they can also speak English.

Do you think I am your first choice now? Looking forward to meeting you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示,認真審題，根據(jù)提示，確定文章的中心。注意人稱和時態(tài)。盡量使用熟悉句型，使用簡單句式，同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性，提示詞需用上。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。上下文意思連貫，用詞準確、句子通順，注意人稱和時態(tài)。文中使用了大量的的短語，如I’m writing to invite you to live in my home during the next two weeks. As for …；Looking forward to meeting you.等，寫作內容包括所有提示詞和提示內容。這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，語句通順，意思連貫，是一篇不錯的文章。