Question

【題目】書面表達

不同的人有不同的愛好。下面表格中列舉了幾個人的愛好、他們的愛好持續(xù)的時間以及一些相關(guān)的信息。請你以 “Different People, Different Hobbies” 為題并做適當發(fā)揮，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

Name	Hobby	How long	More information
Toby	Swimming	For 5 years	Strong and healthy
Mike	Collecting coins	Since he was ten	Over 300 coins
Jane	Seeing English movies	For three years	Relaxed, a good way to learn English

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Answer 1

【答案】Different People, Different Hobbies

I have three good friends. They have different hobbies. Toby likes swimming. He can swim very well. He has been swimming for 5 years. He is very strong and quite healthy. Mike likes collecting kinds of coins. He has been collecting them since he was ten. So far he has collected more than 300 coins. They are from his parents and his friends. Some of the coins are from his own country, some are from other countries. Jane likes English very much. She likes seeing English movies. From the English movies, she not only learned a lot of English words but also she can sing many English songs. She thinks she can be relaxed. She often says to me that seeing English movies is a good way to learn English.

【解析】

寫作

本文需要根據(jù)表格，描述3個人的愛好、愛好持續(xù)的時間以及一些相關(guān)信息。重點是要正確使用時態(tài)，通過持續(xù)的時間可以初步確定在描述的時候可以借助現(xiàn)在完成進行時，為了避免死板，要善于加入一些句子或短語使得文章更加連貫。

寫作亮點：

文章開頭點明主題（I have three good friends. They have different hobbies.），語言簡練。在描述每個人的愛好時正確使用了時態(tài)，以Toby的描述為例，描述他的愛好是游泳用一般現(xiàn)在時陳述事實即可（Toby likes swimming.），要想描述他游泳了多久，持續(xù)了多長時間用現(xiàn)在完成進行時（He has been swimming for 5 years.），描述他的身體狀況時仍然使用一般現(xiàn)在時陳述事實（He is very strong and quite healthy.）。正確運用時態(tài)來實現(xiàn)寫作目的十分關(guān)鍵。在描述Mike的愛好時講到他收集了超過300個硬幣，加入了時間狀語（so far）配合現(xiàn)在完成時，是寫作的亮點，說明作者對完成時的時間狀語學(xué)習清晰。