Question

1．學(xué)校近期舉辦征文比賽．請根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇以"My dream home"為題的文章（80字左右）．

My dream home	1．在山腳下．有三層樓，一樓有家庭影院．前面有個花園，旁邊有個足球場
	2．空氣清新，環(huán)境安靜．山上滿是花和樹，每天能聽到鳥叫，聞到花香．
My neighbours	1．樂于幫助別人，經(jīng)常互相幫助解決各種各樣的難題． （舉例說明，至少2點，用 if…/when…）
	2．那兒的人像一個大家庭．

My dream homeMy dream home is very big．It is at the foot of the mountain，there are three stories in my house，and on the first floor there is a family cinema．There is a garden in front of it，and there is a football field next to it．The air is fresh and the environment is quiet．The hills are full of flowers and trees．Every day we can hear birds calling．The neighbors are friendly，when someone is in trouble，they will help him，they often help each other solve all kinds of difficult problems．The people there are like a big family．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
there are three floors in my house．我的房子有三層，這是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
when someone is in trouble，they will help him當(dāng)有人陷入困境時，他們會幫助他．這是when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，當(dāng)…時候．

解答 My dream home
My dream home is very big．It is at the foot of the mountain，there are three floors in my house【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】，and on the first floor there is a family cinema．There is a garden in front of it，and there is a football field next to it．【要點一，房子的構(gòu)成】The air is fresh and the environment is quiet．The hills are full of flowers and trees．Every day we can hear birds calling【要點二，環(huán)境】．The neighbors are friendly，when someone is in trouble，they will help him【高分句型二，注意時間狀語從句的使用】，they often help  solve all kinds of difficult problems．The people there are like a big family．【要點三，鄰居】

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