Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

根據(jù)提供的要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇50詞左右的短文。

要點(diǎn)：

1. 假如你叫Jim,你的朋友叫Gina Brown, 請(qǐng)介紹一下Gina的姓、名、電話號(hào)碼（0571-82538974）

2. 介紹她的家庭成員（父母和一個(gè)哥哥，叫Dave）

3. 介紹一下她的房間里的物品及物品的位置（至少3樣物品）

要求： 要點(diǎn)齊全、書(shū)寫(xiě)工整、卷面干凈。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My name is Jim. I have a good friend. Her name is Gina Brown. Her first name is Gina, and her last name is Brown. Her telephone number is 0571-82538974. Her parents are teachers. She has a brother. His name is Dave. Here is a photo of her room. There are some pictures on the wall. There is a chair and a desk. A bed is next to the desk. Her room is very tidy.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹Jim的好朋友Gina的情況。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My /Her name is…，I have ...， Her telephone number is...，Here is...，There are...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意主謂一致，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來(lái)介紹朋友的名、姓、電話號(hào)碼、家人，最后介紹朋友的房間。此處用了等first name, last name, telephone number, a photo of, on the wall這些詞組，也讓文章增色不少。