Question

1．親愛(ài)的同學(xué)們，三年的初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，你們即將離開(kāi)熟悉的母校和三年來(lái)朝夕相處并給予你們無(wú)盡關(guān)愛(ài)和幫助的老師們．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容，談?wù)勀闶煜さ挠⒄Z(yǔ)老師．
My English Teacher

Name	Ms．Li
Age	35
Looks	tall，beautiful，long curly hair
Hobbies	reading，singing，dancing，playing sports
Character（性格）	patient，friendly，warm-hearted
My comment（評(píng)價(jià)）	a good teacher，a friend，a mother

要求：（1）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)學(xué)校和老師真實(shí)姓名．
（2）語(yǔ)言要通順，表達(dá)要正確．
（3）文章要求包含表格中的所有提示．
（4）詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)英語(yǔ)單詞．
（5）文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．
I have met many excellent teachers in junior school．One of them is my English teacher．Her name is Ms．Li．She is about thirty-five years old．She is not only tall but also beautiful．She has long curly hair Ms．Li also has a lot of hobbies，such as reading，singing，dancing，playing sports．She is very patient with us．We all think she is a friendly and warm-hearted teacher．Ms．Li is a good teacher．She is like a friend of ours．And sometime she is also like our mother．We all love her．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文，初中生活即將結(jié)束，介紹最喜歡的一位英語(yǔ)老師，其中寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：1．姓名（已給出）、年齡、外貌．2．愛(ài)好和性格．3．你對(duì)李老師的評(píng)價(jià)．因?yàn)槭敲枋霈F(xiàn)在最熟悉最喜歡的英語(yǔ)老師，因此這篇短文用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)就可以．

解答 I have met many excellent teachers in junior school．One of them is my English teacher．Her name is Ms．Li． She is about thirty-five years old．She is not only tall but also beautiful．She has long curly hair． Ms．Li also has a lot of hobbies，such as reading，singing，dancing，playing sports．She is very patient with us．We all think she is a friendly and warm-hearted teacher．Ms．Li is a good teacher．She is like a friend of ours．And sometime she is also like our mother．We all love her．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 圖表作為書(shū)面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，顯得簡(jiǎn)潔明了，正被越來(lái)越多的各級(jí)各類(lèi)英語(yǔ)考試所采用．提綱圖表式作文屬于控制性寫(xiě)作的范疇．它控制性強(qiáng)，便于評(píng)分．應(yīng)仔細(xì)分析圖表，引證典型數(shù)據(jù)并按提綱要求進(jìn)行取材與構(gòu)思．