Question

假如你們班明天下午召開(kāi)一次關(guān)于英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方法交流的班會(huì)。請(qǐng)你以How do I learn English?為話題，根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇簡(jiǎn)短的發(fā)言稿。要求: 70詞左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

提示：1. 加入英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部；  2. 常去英語(yǔ)角； 3. 每天早晨早起記單詞； 4. 常做聽(tīng)力練習(xí)；  5. 收看英語(yǔ)節(jié)目。

Good afternoon, everyone!

It’s an honor to talk with all of you here.                                                                                

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

That’s all. Thank you!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Good afternoon, everyone!

It’s an honor to talk with all of you here. I want to give you some advice on how to learn English well. In order to improve my English, I joined an English club. And I often go to the English corner and talk with others in English. I usually remember new words as soon as I get up every morning. I often follow the tapes to do some listening practice. In my spare time, I often watch some English programs on TV. I have made some progress this term, and do you want to have a try?

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：本文的寫作注意條理性的把握，將文章的要點(diǎn)要進(jìn)行全面的說(shuō)明。首先表達(dá)自己為了學(xué)好英語(yǔ)而加入了英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部I joined an English club.常去英語(yǔ)角和別人用英語(yǔ)交流go to the English corner and talk with others in English.每天早晨早起記單詞可以用as soon as句型來(lái)表達(dá)“一…就”，句式上顯得緊湊，活潑。然后說(shuō)明自己常做聽(tīng)力練習(xí)do some listening practice.收看英語(yǔ)節(jié)目I often watch some English programs on TV.最后呼吁大家也試試這些方法，并且自己已經(jīng)取得了一些成功do you want to have a try.

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：初中英語(yǔ)的作文，出考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力外，還要求學(xué)生能夠變換句式，學(xué)會(huì)用不同的表達(dá)，來(lái)表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思，要在“準(zhǔn)”字和“美”上下功夫。在寫作中注意人稱與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面，同時(shí)要學(xué)會(huì)多用副詞來(lái)修飾謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，這樣顯示出深厚的語(yǔ)言根底。對(duì)于初三的作文，在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫的好的句子進(jìn)行默寫，考試時(shí)就能寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文。