Question

某英語(yǔ)雜志社舉辦以“健康生活”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所列的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，以“ How to keep healthy ? ”為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文參加比賽。
內(nèi)容要求：
1 健康的重要。2 你是如何保持身體健康的。3 今后需要注意的地方。
寫作要求：
1.字?jǐn)?shù)80左右；2.條理清楚，語(yǔ)義連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整；
3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名﹑校名﹑地名等相關(guān)信息。
                                                                                   
                                                                                 
                                                                                  

Answer 1

How to keep healthy ?
As we all know, good health is important for success in the exams，so I’m writing to tell you how to keep healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
Best wishes and stay healthy．

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在及將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，注意主謂一致及時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)與時(shí)態(tài)的一致問題。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。在敘述中運(yùn)用了大量連詞及序數(shù)詞，是的文章看起來(lái)?xiàng)l理分明，層次清楚。如:as由于，作為；so因此；first首先；短語(yǔ)如go to bed去睡覺；get up起床；stay up熬夜；a lot of許多；build up建立，培養(yǎng)；at once立即等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。