Question

1．My Plan for the Coming School Year
提示：難忘的初中生活即將結(jié)束，請以"My Plan for the Coming School Year"為題，用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愠踔薪Y(jié)束后一學(xué)年內(nèi)的打算．
要求：
1．語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)．
2．文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)；
3．短文寫在答題卡上．寫在本試題卷上無效．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇以My Plan for the Coming School Year為題目的作文，主要圍繞新學(xué)年的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃展開寫作，作文中要以一般將來時(shí)為主．作文要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)要正確； 上下文要連貫以及語言要得體．還要注意拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號．

解答 New year school is coming．All things have changed，but one thing have never been forgotten，which is studying．Next term，I will go to the senior school．So I must do well in the entrance exam of senior school．As these reasons，I plan a design for my study．
First，I will never waste my time again．You know Franklin said，"Never leave that until tomorrow，which you can do today．"．I will do it as these words of Franklin．Second，I will ask more questions which is a puzzle for me．Because of these things can let me understand all of knowledge in book very well．Third，I will do more exercises．Such as，English，Maths，Chinese and so on．
In a word，time is important，we should cherish the time．So action is only one thing I can do!

點(diǎn)評 以提綱提供情景的作文，要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時(shí)，要注意謂語動詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．