Question

【題目】書面表達(dá) (共1題，15分)

隨著越來越多的農(nóng)村勞動(dòng)力進(jìn)入城市，在農(nóng)村隨之產(chǎn)生了一個(gè)特殊的未成年人群體-留守兒童。近日，你校即將開展幫助留守兒童的志愿者活動(dòng)。假如你是校報(bào)英語專版的編輯，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的表格提示寫一封倡議書，向全班同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議，關(guān)注留守兒童。

提示：1.現(xiàn)狀：農(nóng)村有很多留守兒童。

2.提倡：1．與留守兒童交朋友；2．在生活方面關(guān)心照顧他們；3．在學(xué)習(xí)方面幫助他們。

要求：1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右（文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2．根據(jù)所給信息可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：留守兒童left-behind children、

參考短語、句型： take care of, make friends with sb., invite sb. to do sth.，help…with…

Dear classmates，

There are many left-behind children in the countryside in China.

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Yours,

Editor.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear classmates，

There are many left-behind children in the countryside in China．Their parents can’t take good care of them. I think we should do something to help them.

First, we can make friends with them, for example, inviting them to our school or writing to them. Second, we are able to help them to have a better life by giving them daily products. Finally, we can help them with their lessons.

This activity is very meaningful; it is not only good for the left-behind children, but also helpful to us.

Yours,

Editor

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為話題類作文，要求根據(jù)表格提示寫一封倡議書，向全班同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議，關(guān)注留守兒童。寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)列出，要求明確，故要完成寫作任務(wù)，務(wù)必把各要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇范文成功地完成了寫作任務(wù)，要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。本文應(yīng)用了很多短語使得文章很生動(dòng)，例如Their parents can’t take good care of them. I think we should do something to help them.表示順序的副詞First, Second, Finally,的應(yīng)用更使得短文表述層次更清晰。總之，該文是一篇不錯(cuò)的短文。