Question

18．英語報將在全市舉辦以Giving is receiving 為主題的征文大賽．請你寫一篇征文談?wù)劗斀裰袑W生如何幫助別人，要點如下：
在學校：幫助老師，關(guān)心同學等等
在家里：
在社區(qū)或其他場所：
幫助別人，快樂自己．
注意：（1）詞數(shù)80-100；
（2）請結(jié)合實際增加細節(jié)，適當發(fā)揮，不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和姓名；
（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
There is an old saying-Giving is Receiving．It reminds us of that we should try to help others．As a student，
                                             
So，please be ready to help with each other and our life will be better and better．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：I think that I did a very meaningful thing我認為我做了一件很有意義的事．that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．
句型二：I'm sure that you won't to lose我相信你不會輸．表語從句．

解答 Giving is recieving
In many people's eyes，giving is never a good thing．But giving can also be recieving．（表明自己的觀點）
    For example，when I was young．I helped with the housework in my home．I spent energy，and I wasted my happy time．But now，I think that I did a very meaningful thing．【高分句型一】Because I recieve some very precious experiences．I learned to do housework well，I learned to help my parents．（具體做什么，用實際行動來證明）
    Try to give something to others．I'm sure that you won't to lose..【高分句型二】
"Giving is recieving．"I'm sure that this sentence will help me in the future．

點評 在寫作時需要明確寫作要點，注意寫作中人稱和時態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達流暢，所以平時應(yīng)多注意�？嫉淖魑男问剑�積累相關(guān)的短語和詞匯．