Question

【題目】 Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “______ influenced me deeply”. (請以“_______深深地影響了我”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)

提示：在我們的學習和生活中，我們一定遇到過深刻影響我們的人或事。有時候一句關懷、一個活動、一個人等等都會給予我們深刻的印象。請先補全題目，然后結合你的經(jīng)歷，談談你的感受。

（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。）

__________ influenced me deeply

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Answer 1

【答案】例文：

My uncle influenced me deeply

Thepersonwhohasinfluencedmedeeplyis myuncle. Heworksinafactory. Heisnot onlykindtoeveryonebutalsopatientwith the peoplethat have trouble in their work. Asfaras Iknow, hehasnevermadeanymistakes. Heisalsoabraveandkind-heartedman. Whenhefacesdifficultyinhisdailylife, he nevergivesupwhathedecidedtodo. He isalwaysabletotakeeverychanceto succeed. HeteachesmehowI shouldbeagood personandgivesmethecouragetofaceany difficulty. So Iwanttosay, “Iloveyou, my dearuncle. Ihavegrownuphappilywith yourhelp. Ihopeyouwillbehappyand healthyforever.”

【解析】

1. 題干解讀：文章是一篇半命題作文。首先要確定題目，把題目補充完整，確定文章的中心，根據(jù)這個中心展開描寫即可，要注意文中“對我的影響”的部分要描寫清楚具體，襯托主題。