Question

Writing 18(2012 北京)

     根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。所給英文提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

     生活中每個(gè)人都有過(guò)與他人分享的體驗(yàn)，如分享一本有趣的書(shū)、一段難忘的經(jīng)歷、一個(gè)閃光的想法……

     現(xiàn)在，某英文報(bào)紙就分享(Sharing) 話題征文，請(qǐng)你投稿。描述一次你與他人分享的經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?/p>

 提示詞語(yǔ)：share... with...                ;experience;interest;learn;change;encourage;enjoy;happiness;confident

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       

Answer 1

Writing 18

[寫作要點(diǎn)]

1. 文章應(yīng)寫成夾敘夾議類型，而且要先敘后議、多敘少議、詳敘精議；

2. 先以過(guò)去時(shí)回憶過(guò)去與人分享的經(jīng)歷，注意使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，避 免重復(fù)使用簡(jiǎn)單句，另外詞匯要盡可能豐富；

3. 結(jié)尾處談對(duì)“分享”的感受，時(shí)態(tài)可轉(zhuǎn)為現(xiàn)在時(shí)，可以用簡(jiǎn)短的排比句式，以sharing作主語(yǔ)，會(huì)起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的效果。

[參考范文]

      I had an experience of sharing.When my family moved,I had to go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that I failed.I got worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and asked softly if I was OK.After I told him about my problem,he gave me some advice.From then on,we got to know each other and shared our ideas,problems and happiness. We became good friends. Sharing with friends helps me bring back my confidence and fit in with others.