Question

【題目】寫(xiě)作（計(jì)分15分）

假設(shè)讓你代表今年的初中畢業(yè)生在畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言， 請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。

回顧	美麗的校園，師生友好、生動(dòng)有趣的課堂， 三年來(lái)的收獲
感謝	老師的培養(yǎng)（training），父母的支持（support），同學(xué)的幫助
祝愿	考生自擬

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于80詞。 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 發(fā)言稿須包括所給提示內(nèi)容，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，是短文連貫、通順。

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

Good morning, my dear teachers and schoolmates,

It’s a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of(代表某人) the graduating classes. How time flies! Our junior high school lives will come to an end.

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Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】

It's a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating classes．How time flies ! Our junior high school lives will come to an end．

In the past three years, we've had a beautiful school and it provides us with a good study place．Teachers are our friends．They've given us interesting lessons and we all love them．

We've learned a lot from them, not only knowledge but also the way to solve problems in life．Thanks for our teachers' training, parents' support and the help from classmates．Without them, we couldn't have so much wonderful time．

At last, we hope our school will become better, our teachers will be healthy for ever and all our dreams will come true．

Thank you for listening．

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如 In the past three years, we've had a beautiful school and it provides us with a good study place．等，not only， but also使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。