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20．隨著經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展，平板電腦在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活中的使用日益廣泛．現(xiàn)在有些學校在學生中推行使用平板電腦上課．而在學校中學生是否應該用平板電腦上課，有些家長和老師持有不同的觀點．你們學校的English Newsletter正在就此舉行征文活動，請根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇征文．

	觀點	理由
一些老師	贊成使用	1．學生對學習更加感興趣； 2．老師能及時了解學生的學習情況． 3．…
一些家長	反對使用	1．有學生用平板電腦玩游戲； 2．用平板電腦對學生眼睛有害； 3．…
你的觀點	…	1 … 2．…

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With the development of economy，pads are more and more widely used in our daily life．However，some parents and teachers have different ideas about if the students should use pads at school．
Some teachers are for it．They think that using pads in class can make students more interested in study．On the other hand，teachers can learn about whatstudents have learned more quickly and easily so that they can teach more effectively．What's more，with the help of pads，teachers can correct students'homework in a short time，as a result of which，much time can be saved．
However，some parents are strongly against it．They hold the opinion that some students can'tcontrol themselves and often play games on pads．Secondly，using pads too much does great harm to students'eyes．What's worse，it costs much money to buy a new Pad．
In my opinion，Ithink it is good for students to use pads in class．Firstly，students can learn more in class using pads．At the same time，parents andteachers should do something to help students use pads in a right way．Only in thisway can pads be of help to their studies．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
some parents and teachers have different ideas about if the students should use pads at school一些家長和老師關于學生是否能在學校使用平板電腦有不同的想法．這是if引導的賓語從句，是否…．
高分句型二
They think that using pads in class can make students more interested in study他們認為在課堂上使用平板電腦可以使學生對學習更感興趣．這是一個賓語從句，They think 是主句，后面的是賓語從句．

解答 With the development of economy，pads are more and more widely used in our daily life．However，some parents and teachers have different ideas about if the students should use pads at school．【高分句型一，注意if引導的賓語從句的使用】
Some teachers are for it．They think that using pads in class can make students more interested in study【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】．On the other hand，teachers can learn about what students have learned more quickly and easily so that they can teach more effectively．What's more，with the help of pads，teachers can correct students'homework in a short time，as a result of which，much time can be saved．【要點一，一些老師的觀點】
   However，some parents are strongly against it．They hold the opinion that some students can't control themselves and often play games on pads．Secondly，using pads too much does great harm to students'eyes．What's worse，it costs much money to buy a new Pad．【要點二，一些家長的觀點】
   In my opinion，I think it is good for students to use pads in class．Firstly，students can learn more in class using pads．At the same time，parents and teachers should do something to help students use pads in a right way．Only in this way can pads be of help to their studies．【要點三，你的觀點】

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