【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。(15分)

假如你是劉梅。根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)一篇短文。

我叫劉梅,是個(gè)活躍的女孩。我參加過(guò)很多比賽,曾獲得一等獎(jiǎng)。夢(mèng)想成為一名像王亞平一樣的宇航員,期待去月球和其他一些行星。我每天鍛煉,健康狀況很好。有一個(gè)5歲的弟弟,他英俊且聰明。他的愛(ài)好是畫(huà)畫(huà),希望成為一名藝術(shù)家。父母對(duì)我們滿意,為我們而驕傲。

【答案】

My name is Liu Mei. I am an active girl. I have taken part in many competitions. And I have ever won the first prize. I dream to be an astronaut like Wang Yaping. I expect to go to the moon and other planets. I take exercise every day. So I am in excellent condition. I have a five-year-old brother. He is handsome and clever. His hobby is drawing. He hopes to be an artist. Our parents are satisfied with us. They are proud of both of us.

【解析】

試題分析:本題是讓考生寫(xiě)一篇自我介紹,相對(duì)于初一剛?cè)雽W(xué)時(shí)寫(xiě)的自我介紹要復(fù)雜一點(diǎn),不僅僅只介紹自己的基本情況,還包括了的性格,的參賽經(jīng)歷,的夢(mèng)想等,還有的弟弟的一些基本情況。考生只掌握一些簡(jiǎn)單句是不能完成這樣的介紹的,需要考生對(duì)英語(yǔ)一些較為復(fù)雜的句型熟練運(yùn)用,另外也考查了考生的詞匯及短語(yǔ)的積累。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn):該篇作文按照題目要求完整地介紹了自己,語(yǔ)句表達(dá)通順,沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。詞匯和短語(yǔ)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng),毫不生硬,顯示了作者較為熟練的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)水平。作者的詞匯量在寫(xiě)這篇作文時(shí)很好的展現(xiàn)出來(lái),一些不常見(jiàn)和比較難的詞匯拈手即來(lái),比如competitions.比賽,astronaut宇航員,planets星球等。一些新奇的表達(dá)方法也使文章增色,比如說(shuō)到身體健康的時(shí)候,作者沒(méi)有用health這個(gè)詞而是用的I am in excellent condition。還有很多亮點(diǎn)詞組,像take part in參加,dream to be 夢(mèng)想成為,satisfied with 對(duì)……滿意等等。

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