Question

【題目】 書面表達（滿分15分）

我們生活中處處都有關心和幫助，你也許幫助過別人，也許被別人幫助過，不管是學習上還是生活上；不管是英語的學習上，還是數(shù)學的學習上；不管是別人對你所說的一句話還是一段有教育意義的文章、信件等。請你就你生活的經(jīng)歷，寫一篇關于幫助的短文，題目自擬, 也可以參考以下題目：

Help Each Other / Take Care Of Others / My Teacher’s Help / My Classmate’s Help 。

要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名。2.圍繞中心，主題突出，不偏題。3.字數(shù)不少于80個單詞。

Answer 1

【答案】

Help Each Other

After class, the students to play on the ground, the playground is lively, skip, some classmates have play hide-and-seek, some.

June day face - boy says to change, suddenly the size of the rain, the playground is just like an arrow as rushed into the classroom. I also like other people rushed into the classroom. Suddenly I heard a voice, "ah", turn head a see, there is a classmate was knocked down on others. I did not rain, steps and two step back. See the blood from his knee and expression appears very painful, speechless, tears in her eyes and round, fast. "I helped you to the clinic?" He nodded his head. We slowly toward the clinic. See the doctor for his uncle wound, I quietly left.

Helping others is a happy things

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達準確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當使用一些連接詞來加強文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達準確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達方式如June day face - boy says to change, suddenly the size of the rain, the playground is just like an arrow as rushed into the classroom.等。