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【題目】你最喜歡哪類電視節(jié)目？你最喜歡的電視節(jié)目又是哪個(gè)？你喜歡它哪些方面？你能從中收獲些什么？假期快到了，你打算在假期如何安排時(shí)間觀看這個(gè)節(jié)目并談?wù)勀愕睦碛�。�?qǐng)以My favorite TV show為題寫一篇不少于60字的作文。要求字跡工整，調(diào)理清晰。

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My Favorite TV Program

My favorite TV program is "Animal World". We can watch the program every Sunday evening. The program tells us the story of animal life. We can learn the animals' habits and their natural surroundings.

In Shanghai Zoo, there are also many animals. But in the program we can see more animals. It gives me a chance to learn about the other creatures. Animals are our friends. It is wrong to kill them for food. We must do our best to protect them. I hope I can do something for the wild animals.In summer vacation I’m going to watch it every Sunday evening and learn more about animals.

【解析】

試題分析：首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以在寫作時(shí)，要尤其一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的表達(dá)方式。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如：My favorite TV program，the story of animal life，the animals' habits and their natural surroundings，a chance to learn about the other creatures，kill them for food，do our best to protect them，learn more about animals等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性、更富有條理。