Question

4．某英文雜志正在舉辦以"Protect our environment"為主題的征文大賽．假如你是陽(yáng)光學(xué)校（Sun School）初三5班的李敏，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文參賽，文中請(qǐng)先介紹自己（如姓名、班級(jí)等），然后談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生，我們可以為保護(hù)環(huán)境做點(diǎn)什么，并呼吁大家參與到環(huán)境保護(hù)的行動(dòng)中來．
提示詞語(yǔ)：name，save，energy，recycle，wastes，duty，join
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
First，we can save as much energy as possible．
句中涉及到短語(yǔ)"as…as possible 盡可能…"，這句話意為：首先，我們可以盡可能多的節(jié)約能源．
高分句型二：
In a word，the environment is very important and it's our duty to protect it．
句中涉及到短語(yǔ)"in a word 總而言之"、"it is one's duty to do sth  做…是…的責(zé)任"．這句話意為：總而言之，環(huán)境非常重要，保護(hù)它是我們的責(zé)任．

解答 My name is Li Min，a girl from Class 5，Grade 3，Sun School．（自我介紹）
As middle school students，we should do something to protect our environment．First，we can save as much energy as possible．【高分句型一】For example，we can go to school by bike instead of by car．Second，try to recycle wastes such as old newspapers，bottles and cans．Third，we can plant more trees to make our environment greener and cleaner．（保護(hù)環(huán)境的建議）
In a word，the environment is very important and it's our duty to protect it．【高分句型二】Please join us and take action．（發(fā)出倡議）

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