Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

隨著電子商務(wù)的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)上購物已經(jīng)越來越流行了，請根據(jù)下列提示詞，描述一下你第一次網(wǎng)購的經(jīng)歷。

要點(diǎn)與參考詞匯：want to buy a book, excited, pay money, wait for a long time, broken , sad, call the seller, change, at last , learn be honest, in online shopping

寫作要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括上面提示的要點(diǎn)。（盡可能多地應(yīng)有以上包括要點(diǎn)的詞匯，并可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）

2. 文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理，條理清晰，語句連貫、行文流暢。

3. 詞數(shù)：80左右。短文開頭已給出，你可以選擇使用，或者自己從頭開始寫。（如選用開頭，請接著從下一行開始寫，開頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。如不選用開頭，請空兩行，自己從頭開始寫）

It is really convenient to shop online because of the development of the e-business. I still remember the experience that I shopped on taobao for the first time.

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Answer 1

【答案】

It is really convenient to shop online because of the development of the e-business. I still remember the experience that I shopped on taobao for the first time.

I could find the book that I wanted in the bookstore. So I decided to buy a book online. I felt a little excited because it was my first time. After paying money online, I waited for a long time.

When the book arrived, it was broken. I felt really angry and called the seller. The seller agreed to change another book for me. I learn that being honest is important in online shopping. At last I got the new book and felt happy. (84 words)

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。