Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是李明，請你給Mr. Know 寫一封信，關(guān)于你們學(xué)校的規(guī)矩太多了，不允許你們在教室吃東西，不允許你們在過道瘋打，在學(xué)校必須穿校服等等，你認(rèn)為，你們應(yīng)該被允許做某些事情，并希望得到他的幫助。

要求:

1. 要點齊備，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 80詞左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

Dear Mr. Know,

We have too many rules in our school.

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Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Know,

We have too many rules in our school. For example, we aren’t allowed to eat anything in class or run around in the hallways. We should wear our school uniform at school and we should go to school on time and never be late. We are required to keep the classroom clean and quiet. We can't drink or sleep in class. We must do our homework on time, too. I think these rules are good for our study and school life. Some students don't like wearing school uniforms all the time because it's boring. It's ok with me. However, we should be allowed to have our own ideas.

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用信息提示寫作的話題作文。要求根據(jù)信息提示，以學(xué)校的規(guī)章制度為話題，寫一篇短文。由于在要點中只給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要圍繞要點組織材料，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣�？梢灾鲃诱Z態(tài)、被動語態(tài)并用。

寫作亮點：本文要點明確，語言精練。層次分明。不同要點英語使用的句式也不一樣。語言的表述符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，兩個被動語態(tài)的句子使用的也很得體：We aren’t allowed to eat anything in class or run around in the hallways. We should be allowed to have our own ideas.