Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是李平，你的朋友Linda最近在學(xué)習(xí)上遇到困惑。她感到壓力巨大，寢食難安，情緒低落，學(xué)習(xí)效率低下，請(qǐng)你寫一封信給她，提供一些有益的建議，幫助她調(diào)整心態(tài)，提高效率。

要求：

1. 意思連貫，文字通順。

2. 詞數(shù)在60~80之間。

參考詞匯：relax， stay up late， enough sleep， healthy eating habits， talk to others， feel better.

Dear Linda，

I’m sorry to see that you are unhappy these days. I want to tell you not to worry about your study too much. First， you should ___________________________________________________

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Yours，

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Linda，

I’m sorry to see that you are unhappy these days. I want to tell you not to worry about your study too much. First， you should relax yourself and don’t stay up late.You should have enough sleep.You should have healthy eating habits.If you have trouble you should talk about it with others.Don’t keep silent about it.I think you will feel better.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。