Question

1．大多數(shù)的青少年認(rèn)為在他們的生活當(dāng)中最重要的人是他們的朋友，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況談一談如何交友．
具體要求：
1．字跡要工整．
2．語法正確，語句通順．
3.60 詞左右．
How  to  make  friends
Everyone needs friends．But how can we make friends？In my opinion，we can make friends in the following principles．On one hand，be a good listener．Let people talk about what they really want to talkThat means you understand him．On the other hand，be friendly to people．Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed．In this way，you will have a lot of friends．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
Let people talk about what they really want to talk讓人們談?wù)撍麄冋嬲�想談的話題．這是一個(gè)賓語從句，what they really want to talk是賓語從句．
高分句型二
Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed當(dāng)朋友遇到麻煩時(shí)，盡量幫助他們，因?yàn)榛茧y中的朋友才是真正的朋友．這是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，當(dāng)…時(shí)候．里面又有一個(gè)because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，因?yàn)椤��?/p>

解答 How to Make Friends
Everyone needs friends．But how can we make friends？In my opinion，we can make friends in the following principles．【開頭點(diǎn)明主題】On one hand，be a good listener．Let people talk about what they really want to talk【高分句型一，注意賓語從句的使用】．That  means you understand him．On the other hand，be friendly to people．Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed．【高分句型二，注意時(shí)間狀語從句的使用】In this way，you will have a lot of friends．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹如何交朋友】

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