Question

15．親愛的同學(xué)們，快樂的初中生活即將結(jié)束．在這四年里，敬愛的老師們?yōu)槲覀兏冻隽诵难�與關(guān)懷．請為你最愛的一位老師寫一段畢業(yè)留言：他（她）給你留下的深刻印象、他（她）給你的鼓勵和幫助以及你對他（她）最好的祝愿和思念之情等．
要求：1．可參考下圖所給提示詞，也可適當發(fā)揮，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）．
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校．
3．字數(shù)要控制在80～100詞．

Dear teacher，
I'm leaving school，but I will never forget your love．You area tall and handsome man．You are kind to all of us．I can't forget the moment you talked to me，your smile，your sweet voice and your warm words．
After class，you often helped us with our study．When I was in trouble，you always encouraged me to have confidence．You are not only my teacher but also my friend．I'll often write to you and I'll come back to see you later on．
I wish you a happy，healthy life．
Your student．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容在即將畢業(yè)之際，為你最愛的一位老師寫一段畢業(yè)留言：他（她）給你留下的深刻印象、他（她）給你的鼓勵和幫助以及你對他（她）最好的祝愿和思念之情等．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時與一般過去時．人稱為第一人稱和第二人稱．要注意留言的格式．寫作要點包括：1．老師留下的印象；2．老師的鼓勵和幫助；3．對老師的美好祝愿．常用的重點句型和短語：be kind to sb．，help sb．with sth．，encourage sb．to do sth．，not only…but also…，write to sb等．

解答 Dear teacher，
I'm leaving school，but I will never forget your love．You are a tall and handsome man．You are kind to all of us．I can't forget the moment you talked to me，your smile，your sweet voice and your warm words．
After class，you often helped us with our study．When I was in trouble，you always encouraged me to have confidence．You are not only my teacher but also my friend．I'll often write to you and I'll come back to see you later on．
I wish you a happy，healthy life．
Your student

點評 這是一篇圖畫作文．根據(jù)該題目要求，圖畫中給出的提示詞可作為參考，也可自己適當發(fā)揮．考生在構(gòu)思作文時需根據(jù)題干及圖畫中提示，圍繞畢業(yè)在即向老師表達自己的感激之情展開作文，所發(fā)揮內(nèi)容也應(yīng)與主題相關(guān)，切忌跑題．作文時不要將圖畫內(nèi)容生硬地搬到作文里，而是在材料的基礎(chǔ)上，合理巧妙地構(gòu)思全文，充分表現(xiàn)主題的過程．