Question

【題目】隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，智能手機(smartphone)已被廣泛使用。我們身邊的“低頭族(phubber)”隨處可見。請根據(jù)圖中所示，結(jié)合表格所提供的信息，以“Refuse to be phubbers”為題寫一篇短文。

要求：

1.短文須包含所有信息，語句通順、意思連貫，可適當發(fā)揮；

2.詞數(shù)：80個詞左右（題目與開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

3.不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smartphones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there.

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Answer 1

【答案】Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smartphones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there.

While eating with family members or getting together with friends, some people are always using their smartphones. It can have bad effects on their relationships. Even worse, when some people cross the street, they still concentrate on their phones, which can be dangerous. And others stay up late at night playing games on their phones. I think it is really harmful to their health, studies or work.

In my opinion, we should make good use of smartphones and not depend on them too much. And I do believe that face-to-face conversation is more enjoyable than chatting online. Let's put down our smartphones and refuse to be phubbers from now on!

【解析】這篇作文要求我們以Refuse to be phubbers 為題，介紹一下如何正確使用手機，拒絕做“低頭族”。題目中給出了具體的寫作內(nèi)容：第一部分是根據(jù)圖片的描述，介紹現(xiàn)在很多人都非常喜歡玩智能手機這一現(xiàn)象，引出“低頭族”這個詞匯；第二部分是這種現(xiàn)象的弊端；最后一部分介紹自己的觀點，如何正確使用手機。這三部分組成了整篇文章的內(nèi)容，學生寫作時也可以加上一些過渡句，使整篇文章內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、充實。通過分析可知，這篇作文應(yīng)使用一些限制時態(tài)，注意正確使用動詞、名詞、介詞、形容詞，句子表達應(yīng)符合英語的習慣，不要寫漢語式的英語。還應(yīng)使用一些好的句型、短語，使整篇文章意思連貫，表達流暢。