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12．某中文網(wǎng)站提出"走路去上學(xué)"的倡議，請你就這一話題寫一篇約70詞的英語短文．
內(nèi)容提示：1．走路有利于健康且安全；
2．和同學(xué)結(jié)伴可以相互了解，相互幫助；
3．不需要父母接送，學(xué)會自理；
4．道路上車輛減少，城市不再擁堵；
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要求：1．要點齊全，條理清楚，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范．
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名及姓名，否則不予評分．
3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
參考詞匯：be good for，each other，send，no longer，crowded
Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise．Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise．（走路有利于健康且安全） I think it's good for health and it's safe．（同學(xué)結(jié)伴）When we walk with our classmates，we can talk about something interesting and know each other better．Also，we can help each other．（學(xué)會自理）What's more，if we walk，our parents don't have to send us to school．We can learn to look after ourselves．（城市不再擁堵） As a result，there will be fewer cars in the city．Then the streets are no longer crowded．
I hope more and more students will go to school on foot．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一個提綱作文，要求提出倡議"走路去上學(xué)"，寫作要點有1．走路有利于健康且安全；2．和同學(xué)結(jié)伴可以相互了解，相互幫助；3．不需要父母接送，學(xué)會自理；4．道路上車輛減少，城市不再擁堵；根據(jù)寫作要點這里用一般現(xiàn)在時，用第一人稱，重點詞匯和句型有：be good for，each other，send，no longer，What's more等等．

解答 Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise．（走路有利于健康且安全） I think it's good for health and it's safe．（同學(xué)結(jié)伴）When we walk with our classmates，we can talk about something interesting and know each other better．Also，we can help each other．（學(xué)會自理）What's more，if we walk，our parents don't have to send us to school．We can learn to look after ourselves．（城市不再擁堵） As a result，there will be fewer cars in the city．Then the streets are no longer crowded．
I hope more and more students will go to school on foot．

點評 對待此類提綱作文，尤其是文字材料的提綱，切記要逐句翻譯，寫作前，首先要理清思路，然后選用合適的詞或短語，讓文意更通順，例如本文可以用到Also，What's more．等短語和句型，讓文章有過渡，有條理．