Question

現(xiàn)在環(huán)境變得越來(lái)越差。環(huán)境問(wèn)題影響著人們的工作，學(xué)習(xí)，生活。而我們的工作，生活，生產(chǎn)又使環(huán)境污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重……如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境?請(qǐng)以“How to protect/save our environment/world?”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。

提示：1．水污染和大氣污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重

2．森林被破壞和砍伐

3．白色垃圾隨處可見(jiàn)

要求：1．如何改善/保護(hù)環(huán)境？至少3～4個(gè)方面，80詞左右。

2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地址和姓名。

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

How to protect our environment?

The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution. And when trees are cut down, some animals disappear. There is more and more dirty smoke in the air. People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, it's time for us to protect our environment. Firstly, we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere. And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. Don't use plastic bags. Also, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them. We hope our environment is more and more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，所給要點(diǎn)條理清晰，要求明確，內(nèi)容貼近社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，勾勒要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文中要注意人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)的變化及主謂一致問(wèn)題。同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文能夠根據(jù)寫(xiě)作提示，較好地把與寫(xiě)作相關(guān)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行歸納整合，文章內(nèi)容覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，使文章自然流暢。同時(shí)，使用了一些常用句式和短語(yǔ)，如：more and more、because of、died of、In order to、it's time for sb to do、throw away、as long as possible stop --- cutting等，這為文章增色不少。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。