Question

1．假如你是王紅，你的美國筆友Rose給你發(fā)來email，想在暑假到天津參觀旅游．請你根據(jù)下表提示，為Rose制定一份"天津一日游"計劃，并發(fā)email給她，介紹相關內(nèi)容．

時間	活動
上午	參觀天津博物館，了解天津歷史
下午	登天塔（Tianjin TV Tower），參觀動物園；
晚上	在美食街（the Food Street）吃晚飯，談論各自的校園生活； 去濱江道Binjiang Road購物；

要求：1）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮．
2）詞數(shù)：80～100個，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
3）書寫工整占1分．
參考詞匯：了解…歷史；learn the history of
校園生活：school life

Address	@http://www．englishclub．com/
Subject：	One-day trip
Dear Rose I'm so glad to learn that you will come to Tianjin．I have planned a one-day trip for you．In the morning，I'm going to show you around the Tianjin Museum so you can learn the history of Tianjin． In the afternoon，we are going to climb the Tianjin TV Tower and then we'll go to the zoo．I think it'll be interesting to see those animals． I'm sure you'll enjoy Chinese food in the Food Street．And then we can have a talk about our school life when having dinner together．After that we're going to do some shopping in Binjiang Road． Are you pleased with my plan？I hope you will have a wonderful time in Tianjin． Looking forward to meeting you! Yours， Wang Hong

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是為Rose制定一份"天津一日游"計劃，并發(fā)email給她．注意郵件的格式．時態(tài)主要為一般將來時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1上午：參觀天津博物館，了解天津歷史
2下午：登天塔，參觀動物園；
3晚上：在美食街吃晚飯，談論各自的校園生活；去濱江道購物；
常用到的重點短語：
be going to 打算
show sb around 帶某人參觀
be pleased with 對…滿意
have a wonderful time 玩的開心
【高分句型】
1．In the morning，I'm going to①show you around the Tianjin Museum②so you can learn the history of Tianjin．
①show sb around 帶某人參觀
②so連詞，表示所以，不能與because因為連用．
2．I think ①②it'll be interesting to see those animals．
①think 后是省略了引導詞that的賓語從句
②it是形式主語，動詞不定式是真正主語．
3．And then we can have a talk about our school life when having dinner together．
when having dinner together省略句，完整表達是when we have dinner together．

解答 Dear Rose，
I'm so glad to learn that you will come to Tianjin．I have planned a one-day trip for you．
In the morning，I'm going to show you around the Tianjin Museum so you can learn the history of Tianjin．【高分句型】（參觀天津博物館，了解天津歷史）In the afternoon，we are going to climb the Tianjin TV Tower and then we'll go to the zoo．I think it'll be interesting to see those animals．【高分句型】（ 登天塔，參觀動物園）I'm sure you'll enjoy Chinese food in the Food Street．And then we can have a talk about our school life when having dinner together．【高分句型】After that we're going to do some shopping in Binjiang Road．（在美食街吃晚飯，談論各自的校園生活；去濱江道購物）
Are you pleased with my plan？I hope you will have a wonderful time in Tianjin．
Looking forward to meeting you!
                                                                    Yours，
                                                                    Wang Hong

點評 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書面表達的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線索顯得更簡潔明了，寫作時也容易區(qū)分表達，本題在寫作時，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構思，恰當使用邏輯詞語，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．