Question

2．文段表達(dá)
根據(jù)中文和英文提示，用英文寫(xiě)一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的郵件．郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用．請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的校名和姓名．
假如你叫李華，你們學(xué)校為配合北京申辦冬奧會(huì)，倡導(dǎo)人人都做文明中學(xué)生．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給你的英國(guó)筆友Peter寫(xiě)一封郵件，告訴他你認(rèn)為做個(gè)文明中學(xué)生什么是重要的，你通常是怎么做的，以及你的感受．
提示詞語(yǔ)：think，smile，respect，say hello to，wait in line，on time，happy

Dear Peter，
How is it going？At my school we're talking about what we should do to be a good student．
Nowadays，there are always kinds of traffic accidents reports from newspapers，TV news and so on．As a result，it's important for us to analyze the major causes．The followings are two reports：
According to the pie chart，there are mainly three factors：85% is about driver factors； 5% is from vehicle factors and 10% isenvironment factors．Among them，it's quite clear that the first one is the key point．So another bar chart points that there are 4 reasons to causes it，including spending which is 50%，drunk driving which holds 15%，tired driving which is 25% as well as not using seat-belt which is 25%．
In my opinion，everyone should keep in mind that traffic safety is one of the most ways in our life．At the same time，we should try our best to obey the traffic rules．The harder we try，the happier our life will be!
Anything new at your school？
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一篇圖表作文，給你的英國(guó)筆友Peter寫(xiě)一封郵件，告訴他你認(rèn)為做個(gè)文明中學(xué)生什么是重要的，因?yàn)槭欠治鋈绾稳プ�，所以時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，應(yīng)該以第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)，寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：1．你認(rèn)為做個(gè)文明中學(xué)生什么是重要的．2．你通常是怎么做的．3．你的感受．

解答 Dear Peter，
    How is it going？At my school we're talking about what we should do to be a good student．
    Nowadays，there are always kinds of traffic accidents reports from newspapers，TV news and so on．As a result，it's important for us to analyze the major causes．The followings are two reports：
    According to the pie chart，there are mainly three factors：85% is about driver factors； 5% is from vehicle factors and 10% is environment factors．Among them，it's quite clear that the first one is the key point．So another bar chart points that there are 4 reasons to causes it，including spending which is 50%，drunk driving which holds 15%，tired driving which is 25% as well as not using seat-belt which is 25%．
    In my opinion，everyone should keep in mind that traffic safety is one of the most ways in our life．At the same time，we should try our best to obey the traffic rules．The harder we try，the happier our life will be!
    Anything new at your school？
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 圖表作為書(shū)面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，顯得簡(jiǎn)潔明了，正被越來(lái)越多的各級(jí)各類英語(yǔ)考試所采用．提綱圖表式作文屬于控制性寫(xiě)作的范疇．它控制性強(qiáng)，便于評(píng)分．考生應(yīng)仔細(xì)分析圖表，引證典型數(shù)據(jù)并按提綱要求進(jìn)行取材與構(gòu)思．