Question

4．圖示作文：仔細(xì)觀察下列三幅圖片，展開合理想象，寫一篇短文．
提示詞：rope 繩子 broadcast 宣傳  call on 號召  make contributions to 為…做出貢獻(xiàn)
要求：（1）話題作文或圖示作文任選其一．
（2）詞數(shù)在80～100詞之間．
（3）要求字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
Saving Water
By watching the three pictures above，we can see that there is less and less underground water as the rope of the well becomes longer and longer．
We all know that water is important for us．We can't live without it．But we are short of drinking water now．As middle school students，what should we do to save water？
First，we are supposed to volunteer to broadcast the importance of saving water to the public．It's necessary for us to call on people to save water．
Second，we should do everything we can in our daily life．For example，we must turn off the tap as soon as we finish using it．After washing vegetables，we can use it to water the flowers．After washing faces，it's better to use it to clean the floor．
In a word，everyone should make contributions to saving water so that we won't see that the last drop of water is our tears．
Let's work together to save water!．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一個(gè)看圖作文，圖片的內(nèi)容是通過祖孫三代的井繩的長短變化，讓人們明白地下水越來越少，號召人們要節(jié)約用水．寫作的要點(diǎn)應(yīng)該包括：1．描述圖片內(nèi)容．2．水的重要性．3．應(yīng)該如何做，可以從中學(xué)生的角度和所有人的角度來寫．4．提出節(jié)約用水的號召．由于是講述一種現(xiàn)象以及對策，所以應(yīng)該以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，描述如何去做時(shí)，可以用到will/should/must等情態(tài)動(dòng)詞．

解答 Saving Water
   By watching the three pictures above，we can see that there is less and less underground water as the rope of the well becomes longer and longer．
   We all know that water is important for us．We can't live without it．But we are short of drinking water now．As middle
school students，what should we do to save water？
   First，we are supposed to volunteer to broadcast the importance of saving water to the public．It's necessary for us to call on people to save water．
   Second，we should do everything we can in our daily life．For example，we must turn off the tap as soon as we finish using it．After washing vegetables，we can use it to water the flowers．After washing faces，it's better to use it to clean the floor．
   In a word，everyone should make contributions to saving water so that we won't see that the last drop of water is our tears．
    Let's work together to save water!

點(diǎn)評 本題是看圖作文，內(nèi)容是通過井繩的長短變化，讓人們明白節(jié)約用水的道理．在審題時(shí)，要審清"圖"的用意．然后根據(jù)題目的文字和畫面內(nèi)容提供的信息，進(jìn)行綜合考慮，立意選材，才能寫出切合題意、主題鮮明的短文來．