Question

5．假如你是Mary，你也看過CCTV-2"Good Cook"，學(xué)會了cheese sandwich的制作方法．請你給Amanda回信，并向他介紹cheese sandwich的做法．
寫作要求：1．制作材料：some butter，two pieces of bread，a tomato，an onion some cheese，some lettuce
2．結(jié)合所學(xué)知識和生活實踐，介紹做法，至少5個步驟．
3．條理清晰，語句通順，70詞左右．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Amanda，
Thanks for you letter．I have tried the recipe you told me．I like it so much．I learned to make a cheese sandwich on CCTV-2not long ago．I would like you to try it．Let me tell you how．
Before starting，we should have                                 
I have tried it．It's easy．Tomorrow is Saturday，so you can try it at home by yourself．
Have a nice weekend!
Yours'
Mary．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Next，cut up the tomato and the onion，and put them on the sandwich．
句中有短語"cut up 切碎"、"put sth on sth 把…放在…上"．這句話意為：然后，把西紅柿和洋蔥切碎，然后把它們放在三明治上．
高分句型二：
How delicious it is！
這句話為感嘆句，句型結(jié)構(gòu)為：How+形容詞+主語+謂語！這句話意為：它多么美味啊！

解答 Dear Amanda，
Thanks for you letter．I have tried the recipe you told me．I like it so much．I learned to make a cheese sandwich from CCTV-2 not long ago．I would like you to try it．Let me tell you how．（開篇點題）
Before starting，we should have some butter，two pieces of bread，some cheese and some vegetables，like a tomato，an onion and some lettuce．Now we can start．First put some butter on a piece of bread，about one spoon of butter．Next，cut up the tomato and the onion，and put them on the sandwich．【高分句型一】Then，put some cheese on the sandwich．After that，put some lettuce on the cheese．Finally，put another piece of bread on the top．Now you can eat the cheese sandwich．How delicious it is！【高分句型二】（制作步驟）
I have tried it．It's easy．Tomorrow is Saturday，so you can try it at home by yourself．
Have a nice weekend!（表達(dá)祝福）
Yours'
Mary

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．