Question

假如你是一位youth worker，一位名叫Simon的初三學(xué)生給你來(lái)信傾訴他的煩惱，內(nèi)容見(jiàn)下表。請(qǐng)據(jù)此給他寫(xiě)一封回信，提出針對(duì)性的建議（表中建議可供參考），要求不少于80詞，信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Problems	1. spend two hours watching TV every day, have no time to do homework well 2. be crazy about computer games, be not interested in outdoor activities and study 3. Parents are angry with him and he felt very sad and hopeless
Advice	1. Understand 2. Watching too much TV and playing computer games are bad for health 3. Choose one hobby and achieve a balance between hobbies and study 4. Take part in some outdoor activities

Dear Simon,
Thank you for your letter. I hope I can offer you some useful advice.
I don’t think it’s wise to spend too much time watching TV and playing computer games.
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I hope my advice will be of some value to you.
Bill Smith  

Answer 1

Dear Simon,
Thank you for your letter. I hope I can offer you some useful advice.
I don't think it's wise to spend too much time watching TV and playing computer games. They are bad for your health. At the same time, you will have no time to do your homework well. You should spent less time on TV and computer games. Your parents are angry with you, I think you should understand them. You should talk with your parents. Let them know your problems. Don't give up your hobbies. They are good for you. You can choose one hobby to do every day, then you can achieve a balance between your hobbies and study. You aren't interested in outdoor activities and study, but I think it's good for you to take part in some outdoor activities.
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. At the same time
Bill Smit

試題分析：考查提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái). 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中出現(xiàn)許多常見(jiàn)短語(yǔ)are bad for 對(duì)。。有壞處；have no time to do 沒(méi)有時(shí)間做某事；spent less time on 花費(fèi)時(shí)間在、、上；are angry with 與某人生氣；give up 放棄；be interested in對(duì)、、感興趣； take part in參加。Don't give up your hobbies用了祈使句的否定式。You can choose one hobby to do every day, then you can achieve a balance between your hobbies and study.這個(gè)句子中用then來(lái)連接。You aren't interested in outdoor activities and study, but I think it's good for you to take part in some outdoor activities這個(gè)句子中用but來(lái)連接，think后面跟著賓語(yǔ)從句，it is good for sb to do sth，it做形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是后面的不定式。