Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于愛(ài)好的文章。

In the past	Now	Reason
play computer games	play basketball, listen to music	be bad for eyes, make new friends, help…relax,…

    要求：1、文章要體現(xiàn)表格中的所有提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2、詞數(shù)不少于70詞。
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Answer 1

One possible version：
I used to play computer games after class. But it was very bad for my eyes. Now I enjoy playing basketball. It is good for my health and I get much stronger. And I can make many new friends as well. I also enjoy listening to music. It helps me relax after class. Good hobbies can help people a lot. So I hope everyone can have good hobbies and live happily.

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)應(yīng)抓住表格所提供的信息，過(guò)去、現(xiàn)在的興趣愛(ài)好以及原因。寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)注意文章的層次脈絡(luò)以及時(shí)態(tài)。準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。先介紹過(guò)去的興趣愛(ài)好及缺點(diǎn)，再介紹現(xiàn)在的興趣愛(ài)好及理由。最后，表明自己的看法，脈絡(luò)清晰。本文中運(yùn)用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:used to , as well, be good for, also等。