Question

13．在我們周圍經(jīng)常存在安全隱患，所以我們應(yīng)該對(duì)安全你引起足夠的重視請(qǐng)以The safety around us為題，寫一篇英語短文，說說我們身邊的安全問題，內(nèi)容包括：

At home	be careful with，turn off，power supply，gass holder
On the road	obey the traffic rules，not ride side by side，not listen to music
At school	not push the others on the stairs，if…accident，call 120，do some basic medical training…

要求：1．中文應(yīng)包括以上信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范．
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)涉及考生真實(shí)信息的人名，地名或校名等．
3．文章字?jǐn)?shù)在80-100之間，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
The safety around usSafety is very important for us students．Accidents often happen around us．So we must pay much attention to safety．At home，we should                       
If we can do all these well，we'll enjoy our life better．

Answer 1

分析 本篇話題作文要求以我們周圍的安全為話題，我們可以從三個(gè)方面：在家里，在路上，在學(xué)校，根據(jù)表格所給的信息適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容．本篇是說明文，可以根據(jù)表格地點(diǎn)的先后順邊敘述邊說明安全的重要性．
高分句型：
1．可以使用if 引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句，如：It will be very dangerous if you leave the gas on．
2．使用It is+adj．for sb．to do sth 句型，如：It is nessary for us to d some basic medical training for unexpected needs．

解答 答案：be careful with fire and electricity．Make sure power supply and gas holder are turned off before you leave home．It will be very dangerous if you leave the gas on!On the road，we should always abey the traffic rules．We mustn't listen to music but pay full attention to the condition of roads．Besides，and we'd better not ride side by side．At school，we shouldn't push the others on the stairs when going up and down．If unfornately，there is an accident，call 120 as soon as possible．
  Thus，it is necessary for us to do some basic medical training for unexpected needs．In short，safety must come first．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 話題作文注意根據(jù)文章要點(diǎn)，有條理地進(jìn)行敘述，注意寫后檢查是否有部分語法錯(cuò)誤．