Question

【題目】隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)和科技的發(fā)展，手機(jī)的功能越來越強(qiáng)大。然而，對(duì)手機(jī)的過度依賴卻成了社會(huì)的一種普遍現(xiàn)象。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。

過度依賴手機(jī)的現(xiàn)象	1.熬夜玩手機(jī)； 2.作業(yè)不會(huì)查手機(jī)； 3.過馬路看手機(jī)；
可能導(dǎo)致的危害	1.睡眠不足.……； 2.課上不必認(rèn)真聽講……； 3.……
你的看法和建議	……

注意事項(xiàng)：1.短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；2.根據(jù)情況作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.90個(gè)詞左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名。
With the development of the Internet and technology, many people are depending too much on their mobile phones.

Answer 1

【答案】 The smart-phone has brought us great convenience. However, it has also brought us some problems. First of all, some students stay up late using the smart-phone. Some students prefer to surf the Internet to search for the answer rather than think it by themselves even when they do their homework. Some use the smart phone when they crossing the street. As we all know, the smart-phone can store a great deal of information, which makes our memory worse and worse. Besides, no one can ignore the fact that a growing number of people are occupied in chatting online and Wechat so that it will be difficult for them to communicate with others face to face in real life. In addition, some teenagers are addicted to playing Internet games, resulting in their suffering a poor sleep, which does great harm to their health. They can't listen to teachers in class carefully. In my opinion, we should use the smart-phone correctly instead of depending on it too much in our daily life
【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。寫作要求：過度依賴手機(jī)的現(xiàn)象。熬夜玩手機(jī)；作業(yè)不會(huì)查手機(jī)；過馬路看手機(jī)；可能導(dǎo)致的危害，睡眠不足.……；課上不必認(rèn)真聽講…本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中正確使用比較形式，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。