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【題目】母愛很偉大，但父愛如山。大多數(shù)同學(xué)在母親節(jié)時常送禮物給媽媽表示感恩，有些同學(xué)卻不知道在父親節(jié)時送什么禮物給爸爸。請根據(jù)下面的提示進(jìn)行適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，并向同學(xué)們提出一些建議。
提示：1）如果有足夠的零花錢，可以為父親買一些實用但不貴的東西，如領(lǐng)帶等：
2）還可以為父親做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如為父親準(zhǔn) 備一杯茶等他下班后飲用等。
要求：1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實的名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名。
2）語句連貫詞數(shù)80個左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)
Next Father's Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.
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【答案】參考例文：
Father's Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.
If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don't have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.
No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father's Day. Don't you think so?
【解析】因為有些同學(xué)不知道在父親節(jié)時送什么禮物給爸爸，短文向同學(xué)們提出一些建議。因為父親節(jié)還沒有來到，所以提出建議的句子應(yīng)該用一般將來時，句子的主語用第二人稱。短文用了一些短語和句式，如：give a present to sb給某人一個禮物；come back from work下班回來；make sb +形容詞“使某人怎樣”。用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，No matter what引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點。