Question

【題目】寫作訓(xùn)練。

請(qǐng)以“How to keep our life safer ”為題，寫一篇小作文。

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Keep Our Life Safer

Hello, everyone! I’m Jiang, Li from Class One Grade Nine. My topic is about safety. Safety is the first. There is some advice we must remember: First, when you cross the road, we must obey the rules. We mustn’t cross the road when the light is red. We must wait until the light truns green. Second, when we are hungry, we can’t drink too much cold water, or eat things that are unhealthy. Third, when we play games with our classmates, we should be careful not to hurt ourselves or others. Don’t play in the street. Fourth, don’t talk with strangers Don’t follow a stranger to any strange places. That’s all. Thank you for listening.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。要求介紹生活中青少年應(yīng)該怎樣做讓自己更加安全。我們要抓住重點(diǎn)‘生活中的自我保護(hù)’。主要描述的四點(diǎn)內(nèi)容比較清晰，我們要做的就是用適當(dāng)?shù)木涫剑�合適的連詞，把它們表達(dá)通順的出來(lái)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色.如：Third, when we play games with our classmates, we should be careful not to hurt ourselves or others. Don’t play in the street.等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用， 讓文章更出彩。