Question

15．請(qǐng)閱讀下面的BBC廣播公司W(wǎng)orld Have Your
Say："Life in China"欄目：
BBC World Have Your Say："Life in China"
Every day，BBC News on TV，radio and online brings you stories from across the world．But what we want to hear are the stories that matter to you．
Have got a story about life in China today？If you do，please put your stories here．

I like travaling and I have traveled a lot around China．During the trip，I often find that a number of Chinese don't have good pulic manners（舉止）．They always loudly on the phone and smoke everywhere．The worst is that they often break the rules in public．For example，when I travled in HongKong in January this year，I saw a kid eating noodles on the underground，which is against the rules．However，the kid's mother didn't think he did wrong．Can you believe it？Let's improve our public manners． （Mike，Shenzhen）

I am a 14-year-old boy from a poor village in Fuyang，Anhui Province．Like many other left-behind children（留守兒童）in China，l live with my grandparents now．my father went to work inn Shanghai several years ago．Last year，my mother went there to care for him because his health is not as good as before．They tell me to listen to my grandparents and call me about twice a month to ask about my study．I really miss my parents ans I hope I can afford to go to school in Shanghai．I think every child needs parents'love and care．（Wu Peigen，Anhui Province）

假如你是一名叫李明（Li Ming）的中學(xué)生，看了上述報(bào)道后，你想表達(dá)自己的看法．請(qǐng)你給欄目編輯寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）你對(duì)其中的哪個(gè)故事感興趣？原因是什么？
（2）你對(duì)這個(gè)故事所提及的現(xiàn)象的看法．
（3）就該現(xiàn)象提出至少兩條解決問題的建議．
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名．
（2）語句連貫，詞數(shù)不少于80．作文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Editor，
      I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，同時(shí)也是以電子郵件呈現(xiàn)的書面表達(dá)．注意電子郵件的格式．要求學(xué)生在閱讀的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行寫作，是一篇讀后感．先讓學(xué)生根據(jù)自己閱讀的情況選擇自己喜歡的、感興趣的故事；講述自己感興趣的原因是什么；然后對(duì)這個(gè)故事所提及的現(xiàn)象表達(dá)自己的看法；最后就該現(xiàn)象提出至少兩條解決問題的建議．用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．提建議時(shí)可用到"should；had beeter"等．

解答 Dear Editor，
     I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today．I am interested in Mike's story，because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou．I can't stand bad manners in public，either．
    In fact，I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas．I think it's wrong to break the rules in public．In my opinion，we should know more about good manners．On the other hand，we had better stop people around us from being rude．If we can't stop them，we can always ask the police or someone like that for help．
 Yours，
                                                                                                                                Li Ming

點(diǎn)評(píng) 作文寫作時(shí)：仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)；提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫；根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣．