Question

【題目】朋友會給你帶來歡樂、朋友能解除你學習生活的煩惱，真正的朋友是患難與共。你的朋友如何呢？請你以“My Good Friend”為題寫一篇英語短文。

要求：1、語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數不少于60個；

文中不得出現真實的姓名、校名；

My Good Friend

Answer 1

【答案】

My Good Friend

I have many friends, but my good friend is LiHua. She is 14 years old now and she is a smart and healthy girl. She is fond of running and she never eats junk food. She is interested in playing volleyball, so we often play it together. She shares happiness and sadness with me. She has a wonderful memory, and she can remember all the things that we have experienced. She always encourages me to work hard.

She is my good friend, and I hope we will keep in touch with each other.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的朋友。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時態(tài)，人稱為單數第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：She is…；she never eats…；She shares…及she can…等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意文后要表達自己要和好友保持聯系的愿望。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來介紹朋友的特點和喜好，最后希望我們要保持聯系。此處用了is fond of，is interested in，has a wonderful memory, encourages me to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。