Question

1．Write a short passage for at least 60words according to the given situation（根據(jù)所給情景寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）
Suppose you will give a speech at the school graduation ceremony．Please write something on what you want to say to both your teachers and schoolmates  （假設(shè)在畢業(yè)前夕，你的學(xué)校要為初三學(xué)生舉辦一個(gè)畢業(yè)典禮，你將作為學(xué)生代表進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)短的發(fā)言，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇不少于60字的發(fā)言稿．）
The following is for reference only  （以下表達(dá)僅供參考）
•It's hard to．
•I would like to say…
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分．）

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I have  learned not only how to study but also how to be a mam．
我不僅僅學(xué)會(huì)了怎樣去學(xué)習(xí)也學(xué)會(huì)了怎樣做人．
not only…but also …不僅…而且…，連接兩個(gè)對(duì)等成分．這里是連接兩個(gè)疑問(wèn)詞+to do sth結(jié)構(gòu)．
【高分句型二】
Looking ahead，I'll ①keep on working hard②to achieve my dreams．
往前看，我將會(huì)繼續(xù)努力去實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想．
①keep on doing sth 繼續(xù)做某事
②動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)．

解答 Hello，everyone!I'm very glad to give a speech at the graduation ceremony．How time flies!We are going to graduate from this school．I am very excited and sad．During the past three years，we have studied and played together．With the help of my teachers and classmates，I have made great progress．I have  learned not only how to study but also how to be a mam．【高分句型一】（回顧過(guò)往）  So I would like to say thanks to them．I love   them very much．（感謝）Looking ahead，I'll keep on working hard to achieve my dreams．【高分句型二】（對(duì)將來(lái)的期望）Best wishes to everyone of  you!Thanks a lot．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇命題作文，要求同學(xué)們先根據(jù)題目列出提綱以及寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，行文間要注意簡(jiǎn)化描述，用簡(jiǎn)短的語(yǔ)句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語(yǔ)句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．