Question

2．假如你的名字叫Lisa，你的筆友Tara上周來信向你傾述了她在班上學習成績很好，但朋友很少，感到孤獨的煩惱，并向你尋求幫助．請你根據(jù)提示給她寫封回信，給她以幫助．
1寫作要點提示：
1）簡述Tara的煩惱；
2）針對她的煩惱提出幾點建議；
3）表達你對她的鼓勵與祝愿．
2寫作要求：
信的內(nèi)容應包含所提示的要點，語言要流暢，可圍繞提示要點適當增加情節(jié)，以使信的意思連貫；信的詞數(shù)90詞左右；信的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫出，但不計入總詞數(shù)，也不得抄入
答題卡．
Dear Tara
I got your letter last week．
                                                               
Yours
Lisa．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
You should help the students who are in trouble，both in study and in life你應該幫助處于麻煩中的學生，在學習上和生活上．
who are in trouble是定語從句，who是關(guān)系詞，students是先行詞．
【高分句型二】
I hope you can make more friends and become happy我希望你能有更多的朋友變得開心．
hope后是省略了that的賓語從句．

解答 Dear Tara，
I got your letter last week．I hear that you do very well in all the subjects．Congratulations！But you have few friends．You feel lonely．You don't know what you should do．（簡述Tara的煩惱；）I give some advice：
First，you should help the students who are in trouble，both in study and in life．【高分句型一】They think you can get on well with them．
Then，join them．You can play，sing with them．Doing that can make you a member of them．
Last，after class，you can talk with them．Share the sadness and happiness with them（幾點建議）
I hope you can make more friends and become happy．【高分句型二】（鼓勵與祝愿）
Yours，
Lisa

點評 本題在寫作時，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當使用邏輯詞語，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．